Kia ora, I am a student at Parkview Pārua School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, September 13, 2019
Magic Biscuits -Persuasive Writing- 13.9.19
I have started this story about magic biscuits it inspired me because it was about dogs but I did it in 2018. The Characters are Brian, Summer, James and the dogs Max and Kaia
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Hi Jordyn it's McKenzie. I love your writing, it's amazing. I like how you have added a pictures. Next time you could add a bit more punctuation. Are you doing a magic biscuits 2 ?
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