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Friday, September 13, 2019

Magic Biscuits -Persuasive Writing- 13.9.19

Magic Biscuits

 I have started this story about magic biscuits it inspired me because it was about dogs but I did it in 2018. The Characters are Brian, Summer, James and the dogs Max and Kaia

1 comment:

  1. Hi Jordyn it's McKenzie. I love your writing, it's amazing. I like how you have added a pictures. Next time you could add a bit more punctuation. Are you doing a magic biscuits 2 ?

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